Celebrating my learning.

Recount Writing- At the hot pools.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

At the hot pools.

On a cold Sunday me and my Mum and my brother went to the hot pools.

First I told my Mum before we went to the hot pools

but I put something in my pocket before we came

to the hot pools in Whangarei.

I thought my brother had stolen it so what

I did was to wait until he was sitting down on a

chair then I made my move.

Then I stole it back from him.

After that I ran in the pool.

Then he realized that I had stolen it.

He was angry but he couldn’t do anything about

it because it belonged to me.

After that we ate. I loved the food. It was delicious.

Next we went into the pool with my Mum.

It nice and warm. I felt like I wanted to stay in the pool forever.

Later on we packed up our stuff and went home. 

Finally my Mum told us to go to bed for school

on Monday so we got all our stuff ready for Monday.

Then went to bed.

My Rangoli pattern.

I made this Rangoli Pattern to welcome visitors to our classroom.Rangoli patterns are for the Diwali celebration.Saal Mubarak.

My Fun Learning Wall

This is my Pinwheel story.

My Tornado video.

This is my tornado video. I used a windmaker to blow over my paper house.

My Writing chart.

This is my Term 2 Writing this is where I am achiveing.

My first time as Kaikarakia for Assembly

For our school assembly this morning I was on the taumata

as a kaikarakia.

I was scared that I wouldn't give the instructions properly.

I used the kaha hoe and the tumaia hoe 

to help me say it correctly.

My Spelling chart

I got 56 words out of 64 correct this term. That's 88% correct.

My Basic Facts Chart

This term I scored 70 out of 200 in my basic facts test. I went up by 57 points.

Persuasive Writing-Homework

Homework Homework makes your mind to grow and to be smart and when you’re older you will be smart when you go to college and get good grades. First it makes your mind get smarter and smarter. Secondly it makes you achieve your goals. Lastly it will make your learning go up. Finally you will not be in the ditch because your brain is already smart and brainy. So if you get homework you have to do it so you get smart and clever. So make sure you do homework everyday so you are very smart and always learning your facts and your maths and halves. And if you do not want to learn then you won’t be smart so that is why you should do homework. by Rachel Waiariki.

Persuasive Writing-Brushing Teeth

WALT use the correct structure and language for

Persuasive Writing.

Brushing our teeth.

Brushing teeth is important to always

keep them nice and fresh.

So I think we should brush our teeth every day.

Firstly I think we should brush our teeth every day

so they won’t fall out.
Always brush your teeth twice a day.
When you eat something, bacteria will be inside
and will eat the food you have eaten inside
the little gaps in your teeth and this
damages your teeth and could make them fall out.
So you need to brush this bacteria away.

Secondly I think we should brush our teeth
every day so that we can protect our teeth.
When you brush your teeth it brushes
away the bacteria and the leftover food
and your teeth are clean and safe.

Thirdly I think we should brush our teeth
every day so that they can be strong and healthy.
When you eat food, some food gets stuck
inside your mouth.
We should brush our teeth everyday
so we don’t get all the yucky food
inside our mouth and the bacteria.  

So that’s why I think we should brush our teeth every day.

My Term 2 Learning Goals

I will try my best to achieve my learning goals.