Persuasive Writing-Brushing Teeth

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Persuasive Writing.

Brushing our teeth.

Brushing teeth is important to always

keep them nice and fresh.

So I think we should brush our teeth every day.

Firstly I think we should brush our teeth every day

so they won’t fall out.
Always brush your teeth twice a day.
When you eat something, bacteria will be inside
and will eat the food you have eaten inside
the little gaps in your teeth and this
damages your teeth and could make them fall out.
So you need to brush this bacteria away.

Secondly I think we should brush our teeth
every day so that we can protect our teeth.
When you brush your teeth it brushes
away the bacteria and the leftover food
and your teeth are clean and safe.

Thirdly I think we should brush our teeth
every day so that they can be strong and healthy.
When you eat food, some food gets stuck
inside your mouth.
We should brush our teeth everyday
so we don’t get all the yucky food
inside our mouth and the bacteria.  

So that’s why I think we should brush our teeth every day.