Recount Writing-At the Park

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for recount writing.

On Saturday I went to the park in Kaikohe with my brother and my cousin.

First I got out of bed and got changed.

Next we got ready for the park. After we went to the park.

Then I went on to the park. I went down on the slide then

I was getting bored so I went over to my Mum.

When I got there I told my Mum that I was bored

so she said to go play with my brother. So I went to my brother

but he was playing with some other kids that I did not know but I think he knew them.

While he was playing with them I went to play with my cousin.

He was having fun by himself  so I went over to play with him.

But he did not want to play with other people so I left him to play by himself.

I did not have anything to do. I was feeling sad and lonely.

My Mum came over and said that she was going to

get some drinks because she was thirsty. She drove off in the car.

Then I saw the swings. They had no one on them

so I played on the swing. That made me feel a little bit better.

I played on the swings until my Mum came to the park.