Recount Writing-On Sunday

I am learning to add thoughts and feelings comments in my writing.

On a cold Sunday me and my brother were

at home with my Mum.

We had a quiet day without my baby cousin around.

First my mum got out of bed and cooked lunch.

Next we ate lunch. It was yum.Then my Mum and
I cleaned up the house.Then the house was clean.

After my Mum said that we could go to the park
so we went to the park. It was so much fun.
I felt happy to go to the park.
Then my Mum went to get fish and chips.

When she came back my family came
over to eat fish and chips. It was yum but my
Mum forgot to get some drinks so she went
to go get the drinks but my aunty had drinks
so we had heaps. After that we had to go home.
I was tired so I went to bed so did my brother.

It was cool going to the park with my family.