Recount Writing- At the hot pools.

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At the hot pools.

On a cold Sunday me and my Mum and my brother went to the hot pools.

First I told my Mum before we went to the hot pools

but I put something in my pocket before we came

to the hot pools in Whangarei.

I thought my brother had stolen it so what

I did was to wait until he was sitting down on a

chair then I made my move.

Then I stole it back from him.

After that I ran in the pool.

Then he realized that I had stolen it.

He was angry but he couldn’t do anything about

it because it belonged to me.

After that we ate. I loved the food. It was delicious.

Next we went into the pool with my Mum.

It nice and warm. I felt like I wanted to stay in the pool forever.

Later on we packed up our stuff and went home. 

Finally my Mum told us to go to bed for school

on Monday so we got all our stuff ready for Monday.

Then went to bed.