Mystery Science: butterflies.

This is my mystery science of butterflies.

Recount Writing-At the Park

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for recount writing.

On Saturday I went to the park in Kaikohe with my brother and my cousin.

First I got out of bed and got changed.

Next we got ready for the park. After we went to the park.

Then I went on to the park. I went down on the slide then

I was getting bored so I went over to my Mum.

When I got there I told my Mum that I was bored

so she said to go play with my brother. So I went to my brother

but he was playing with some other kids that I did not know but I think he knew them.

While he was playing with them I went to play with my cousin.

He was having fun by himself  so I went over to play with him.

But he did not want to play with other people so I left him to play by himself.

I did not have anything to do. I was feeling sad and lonely.

My Mum came over and said that she was going to

get some drinks because she was thirsty. She drove off in the car.

Then I saw the swings. They had no one on them

so I played on the swing. That made me feel a little bit better.

I played on the swings until my Mum came to the park.

Recount Writing-On Sunday

I am learning to add thoughts and feelings comments in my writing.

On a cold Sunday me and my brother were

at home with my Mum.

We had a quiet day without my baby cousin around.

First my mum got out of bed and cooked lunch.

Next we ate lunch. It was yum.Then my Mum and
I cleaned up the house.Then the house was clean.

After my Mum said that we could go to the park
so we went to the park. It was so much fun.
I felt happy to go to the park.
Then my Mum went to get fish and chips.

When she came back my family came
over to eat fish and chips. It was yum but my
Mum forgot to get some drinks so she went
to go get the drinks but my aunty had drinks
so we had heaps. After that we had to go home.
I was tired so I went to bed so did my brother.

It was cool going to the park with my family.

Learning goals.

I will work hard to achieve my learning goals.

My fantastic learning wall.

Here is my Fantastic learning wall.It tells me what level I should be on in Reading,writing and what level I am on.

Recount Writing-On Saturday

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings to my writing.

On Saturday me and my mum and brother
went to the beach in Opononi. I felt happy to go there.

When I got there the water looked cold then I went in.

I jumped around in the water.
Then my baby cousin tripped in the water
and his face was in the water. I felt frightened.
I ran and grabbed my cousin and lucky he did not drown.
I pulled him out of the water. He was crying.
I picked him up and passed him to my Mum.

After my mum went to get fish and chips for lunch.
I had the most chips and fish. The fish and chips were yum.

Then we went home. It was a long drive home