I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings to my writing.
On Saturday me and my mum and brother
went to the beach in Opononi. I felt happy to go there.
went to the beach in Opononi. I felt happy to go there.
When I got there the water looked cold then I went in.
I jumped around in the water.
Then my baby cousin tripped in the water
and his face was in the water. I felt frightened.
I ran and grabbed my cousin and lucky he did not drown.
I pulled him out of the water. He was crying.
I picked him up and passed him to my Mum.
Then my baby cousin tripped in the water
and his face was in the water. I felt frightened.
I ran and grabbed my cousin and lucky he did not drown.
I pulled him out of the water. He was crying.
I picked him up and passed him to my Mum.
After my mum went to get fish and chips for lunch.
I had the most chips and fish. The fish and chips were yum.
I had the most chips and fish. The fish and chips were yum.
Then we went home. It was a long drive home
Hi Rachel I really like your writing it is fantastic I loved it that you made me want to read more, its very coolthat you went to Opononi beach you told me everything that happened.
ReplyDeleteWell done